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Grade Details

Student: Tian Gordon

Course Information

Semester: Spring 2026

Course Unit: L4 THM230901 Introduction to Travel, Tourism and Hospitality Management

Credits: 20
Course Grade: REFERRED

Grade Overview

Quiz Completion: Pass
Test Grade: Pass
Term Paper Grade: Referred

Term Paper Feedback

Learning Outcome 1: REFERRED

AC 1.1 – Knowledge of key terminology and theories
Result: REFERRED
Tian, your submission shows only a surface-level awareness of key terminology. You mention the Silk Road, the Grand Tour, wide-body aircraft, airline alliances, low-cost carriers, GPS, booking systems, and mobile technology, but these terms are not defined or applied with enough precision. In Q3, your explanation of airline alliances and low-cost carriers focuses on cargo transport rather than passenger tourism, which reflects a misunderstanding of how these terms apply to the industry. In Q2, describing the Grand Tour as the upgrade of tourism and hospitality is too vague and does not demonstrate knowledge of what the Grand Tour actually was. To meet this criterion on resubmission, define each key term clearly and ensure you understand how it relates specifically to tourism and hospitality, not just transport or trade in general.

AC 1.2 – Analysis and application of concepts to real-world scenarios
Result: REFERRED
Tian, your responses across the paper are too brief and underdeveloped to meet this criterion. In Q1, you correctly note that the Silk Road involved trading silk and using animals and carts for transportation, but you do not explain how this contributed to the development of hospitality or tourism, and there is no link to the modern industry. In Q2, your response does not define the Grand Tour or explain its influence on luxury or educational tourism — the two sub-points you provide are very brief and lack depth. In Q3, your explanation of airline alliances incorrectly focuses on cargo transport rather than tourism growth, which is a key factual error. In Q4, you reference smart devices, AI, GPS, and booking systems, which are relevant, but the explanation is too general and does not clearly demonstrate how these have changed traveller behaviour through two developed examples. In Q5, your booking systems point is relevant but very brief, and the mobile technology point is incomplete. Q6 is the weakest response in the paper — two sentences that state travel contributes to society and that everyone can access it anywhere, without any explanation or analysis. Your Section B essay acknowledges the right historical stages but is largely descriptive, underdeveloped, and does not explain cause-and-effect relationships between historical developments and the modern industry. For resubmission, expand every response significantly, ensure factual accuracy particularly in Q3, and rewrite the essay with a clear argument linking each historical stage to the industry today.

AC 1.3 – Class participation and discussion contributions | PASS

Learning Outcome 2: REFERRED
AC 2.1 — Referred
Tian, your definitions show some engagement with the material but contain significant inaccuracies across several terms. The Jet Age definition incorrectly attributes the beginning of the Jet Age to the Wright Brothers in 1903 — this refers to the first powered flight, not the Jet Age, which began in the late 1950s with the commercial introduction of jet-powered aircraft. The definition does not capture what the Jet Age actually is. The Low-Cost Carrier entry does not define the term at all — instead it describes MA Lite's failure, which belongs in Q2(b). Full Service Carrier is partially addressed with reference to Meridian Air's amenities, but the definition is incomplete and not clearly structured as a standalone explanation. The Deregulation entry is particularly problematic — it is defined as "any issues related to an airport or aircraft," which is entirely incorrect. Deregulation refers to the removal of government restrictions on the airline industry. Secondary Airport is defined only as "an upgraded airport from the original," which is also inaccurate. A secondary airport is a smaller airport near a major city, used as an alternative to the main airport, often by LCCs seeking lower costs. Due to the inaccuracies in Jet Age, the missing LCC definition, the incorrect Deregulation definition, and the inaccurate Secondary Airport definition, AC 2.1 is referred.

AC 2.2 — Referred
Your two Jet Age impacts in Q2(a) — contributing to in-flight services and comfort, and enabling bigger aircraft to carry more than 100 passengers — do not address the core question, which asked how the Jet Age changed air travel and contributed to tourism growth in the Caribbean. Neither point discusses tourism growth, accessibility, or the Caribbean context, and the case study detail provided (MA carrying 2.1 million passengers with full service operations) describes an FSC, not a Jet Age impact on tourism. For Q2(b), your two LCC features — making prices more affordable and attracting passengers — are stated as goals rather than specific structural features of the LCC business model, such as unbundled services or fleet standardisation. The MA Lite failure reason is correctly identified (high-cost staff contracts carried over from the main airline), which is the strongest part of this section. However, the weakness of the Q2(a) response and the underdeveloped LCC features mean AC 2.2 cannot be passed and is referred.

AC 2.3 — Referred
For Q3, only one operational problem is clearly identified — the absence of a centralised Flight Operations Centre — and it is well explained with a relevant consequence referencing the Kingston-Toronto cancellation. However, the question required three problems and only one is present. For Q4, the response appears to reference slow cargo operations due to manual paperwork as a safety concern, which is an operational problem rather than one of the three safety risks listed in the case study. The consequence described — a potential permanent shutdown — is not a realistic or specific safety consequence. Only one safety concern is addressed, and it is not drawn from the correct list of safety risks. For Q5, the two coordination failures identified are the split of dispatch and disruption management across three offices rather than a centralised FOC, and staff not being trained effectively to use A-CDM (Airport Collaborative Decision Making). Both are relevant and drawn from the case study, and this is the strongest section of the paper. However, the significant gaps in Q3 and Q4 mean AC 2.3 cannot be passed overall and is referred.

Learning Outcome 3: REFERRED
AC 3.1 — Referred
Tian, your Question 1 responses contain significant inaccuracies across most terms. Your low-cost carrier definition is the most concerning — describing it as carrying a maximum of five passengers including the pilot describes a small propeller aircraft, not a budget airline. Your ancillary revenue and DMO definitions are also incorrect, and your culinary tourism and carrying capacity definitions are too vague to demonstrate real understanding. Examples are largely absent throughout. AC 3.1 is not passed.

AC 3.2 — Referred
Your Question 2(a) lists airport and airline expansion as consequences, but these are solutions rather than problems — the question asks for the negative impacts first, then the action. Your Question 2(b) describes a travel agency and tour operator as performing essentially the same function, and the difference you identify is not a recognised industry distinction. The fundamental point that a tour operator creates and packages products while a travel agency retails them is missing. AC 3.2 is not passed.

AC 3.3 — Referred
Your Question 3(a) beach experience describes infrastructure development rather than a tourism experience built around Pelican Cay's existing assets, and the target market rationale is too brief. Your Question 3(b) hotel recommendation lacks justification against the government's community benefit goal. Your Question 4 comparisons are largely definitional restatements without applied impact. Question 5 is the strongest part of your paper — you address all three sectors and identify a chain reaction failure point — but the travel section incorrectly prioritises the travel agency over the airport, and the chain reaction response does not trace the failure step by step or propose a mitigation strategy as required. AC 3.3 is not passed.

Learning Outcome 4: REFERRED
AC 4.1 | Referred
Tian, your response to Q1(a) only identifies and develops one principle — empathy and emotional intelligence. Two further principles are required and were not included. The one principle present was applied to the case and supported with a corrective action, which showed some understanding, but the answer cannot meet the standard without all three principles developed with their own explanation and case application. In Q1(b), your definitions of transactional and customer-centric culture were too basic — transactional culture is not simply the flow of communication from management to agent, and customer-centric culture is more than agents solving problems themselves. The two decisions you identified were generic rather than tied to specific actions taken by the agent and management in the Coral Bay case, and no customer-centric alternatives were proposed for either decision.

AC 4.2 | Referred
Your personalisation definition linked the concept to website tracking of guest preferences, which shows basic awareness, but personalisation in a hospitality context means the hotel proactively using guest data to tailor the experience — not simply showing room options online. Your customisation definition was closer to the correct idea. The three personalisation touchpoints at booking were very brief and not clearly developed as distinct moments where the hotel acts on guest data without being asked. The checkout touchpoints were similarly thin. The customisation plan — guests choosing and deleting preferences according to visual appeal — was vague and not grounded in specific, realistic choices such as room layout or F&B preferences. The guest experience perspective was absent throughout. In Q2(b), you identified that the manager's response reflected a lack of emotional intelligence, which was relevant, but the analysis did not frame Carnival as a predictable demand event that required advance planning. The proposed solution of providing discounts and staff empowerment did not constitute a proactive operational change — there was no staffing plan, scheduling strategy, or service procedure adjustment.

AC 4.3 | Referred
Q3(a) is not present in your submission. Three communication failures across verbal, non-verbal, and written channels — each with a corrective action and explanation of impact on the guest — are required and must be included in your resubmission. In Q3(b), you defined verbal and non-verbal communication separately but did not clearly state one similarity and one difference between them as required, and the application to the guest experience was limited. In Q4, you identified that post-stay surveys had been collected for two years without action, and that the GM's statement was problematic, which were the right starting points. However, the feedback and personalisation fix was too brief, the GM evaluation only described the statement as distasteful rather than analysing why it reflects a transactional mindset, the three cultural changes were not developed, and the chain reaction did not show a step-by-step progression from one failure point through to reputational and revenue damage.

Test Scores

LO1:

Pass

LO2:

Pass

LO3:

Pass

LO4:

Pass

Comments

You have demonstrated partial understanding of the required concepts; however, you have not fully meet criteria for a pass this time. You must resit all learning outcome/s you did not pass.