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Grade Details

Student: Dontai Powell

Course Information

Semester: Spring 2026

Course Unit: L4 THM230901 Introduction to Travel, Tourism and Hospitality Management

Credits: 20
Course Grade: REFERRED

Grade Overview

Quiz Completion: Pass
Test Grade: Pass
Term Paper Grade: Referred

Term Paper Feedback

Learning Outcome 1: REFERRED

AC 1.1 – Knowledge of key terminology and theories
Pass

Dontai, your submission shows a satisfactory knowledge of key terminology across the paper. You correctly identify and use terms such as the Silk Road, the Grand Tour, wide-body aircraft, budget carriers, low-cost airlines, online booking systems, mobile technology, jet engine, and mass tourism, placing them in relevant contexts throughout your responses. Your Q2 response is particularly good in this regard, correctly identifying the Grand Tour as a traditional educational journey across Europe between the 17th and 19th centuries undertaken by wealthy young men, and drawing meaningful connections to modern travel behaviour such as visiting cultural sites, collecting souvenirs, and taking academic field trips. To strengthen this criterion further, aim to define terms more precisely rather than describing them generally, and introduce a wider range of industry-specific concepts such as democratisation of travel, standardisation of services, or the economic impact of tourism.

AC 1.2 – Analysis and application of concepts to real-world scenarios
Referred

Dontai, while your submission covers the right topics and shows awareness of real-world developments, the level of analysis does not yet consistently meet the required standard. In Q1, you correctly connect the Silk Road to the provision of inns, guest houses, and cultural exchange, but your response remains descriptive and does not explain how these developments specifically laid the foundations for the modern hospitality and tourism industry. In Q2, your response is one of the stronger ones in the paper — you make meaningful connections between the Grand Tour and modern travel behaviour, including visiting museums, collecting souvenirs, and studying abroad, which shows genuine application of historical concepts. However, the comparison to modern tourism could be made more explicitly analytical. In Q3, you correctly explain that jet travel reduced journey times, that wide-body aircraft made long-haul travel more feasible, and that budget carriers opened tourism to middle and lower income groups — these are valid cause-and-effect points, though they would benefit from being developed further in terms of the impact on globalisation and the structure of the industry. In Q4, you name Booking.com and TripAdvisor as examples, which is appropriate, but your explanation of how they have changed traveller behaviour is limited to the ease of research and booking. The deeper behavioural and industry-level impacts are not explored. In Q5, you identify overbooking, rate fluctuation, and technology failure as challenges, which shows some critical awareness, but benefits are only briefly stated and the analysis overall lacks depth and balance. Your Section B essay covers all four required areas — early trade, the Industrial Revolution, modern aviation, and technology — and makes some reasonable connections, such as trade hubs becoming modern tourism cities and the Industrial Revolution giving rise to seaside resorts and tour operators. However, the essay is largely descriptive, cause-and-effect relationships are stated rather than analysed, and there is no clear conclusion. For resubmission, focus on explaining how and why each development shaped the modern industry, rather than simply noting that it did.

AC 1.3 – Class participation and discussion contributions | PASS

Learning Outcome 2: PASS

AC 2.1 — Pass
Dontai, you defined all five terms and provided examples for each, showing solid overall coverage. Your Jet Age definition correctly noted the democratisation of air travel and cited the Boeing 707 in 1958 as the starting point, which was accurate and well-linked. Your LCC definition referenced MA Lite and short-haul operations, and your Full Service Carrier definition correctly contrasted it with LCCs by noting meals, spacious seating, and long-haul operations, using Meridian Air as the example. Your Deregulation definition was partially accurate — you correctly connected it to the rise of LCCs and cited Southwest Airlines — however, stating that deregulation was "issued in 1978" without explaining it as the removal of government control over the industry meant the definition itself lacked precision. Your Secondary Airport definition was the weakest point, incorrectly describing secondary airports as hubs created because LCCs cannot operate long-haul flights requiring connecting routes — this confuses the concept. Secondary airports are simply smaller, lower-cost alternatives to major city airports used by LCCs to reduce fees. In Question 2, your two Jet Age impacts were clearly stated — shortened travel time from days to hours, and increased accessibility — with a solid case link to Meridian Air's 1974 founding and the growing Caribbean tourism market. Your MA Lite analysis in Question 2b was one of the strongest in the cohort: you identified no meals and no free checked baggage as the two LCC features, and correctly explained that MA Lite failed because staff were transferred from the full-service carrier on the same contracts, making profit impossible as staffing costs exceeded revenue.

AC 2.2 — Pass
Your three operational problems in Question 3 were all drawn directly from the case study and well explained. Baggage mishandling at Piarco was correctly identified as an operational issue, with bad passenger feedback and compensation costs cited as consequences. Cargo operations were correctly linked to manual paperwork and poor team coordination, with missed departure slots, delays, and dissatisfied passengers as consequences. Catering inconsistency from three suppliers was accurately framed as an operational problem affecting passenger experience and service standards. In Question 4, your two safety concerns were relevant and case-based. Crew rest documentation was correctly linked to overworking and fatigue, and you noted a realistic consequence — loss of FAA certification — which showed good understanding of regulatory risk, though the consequence could have been more directly tied to passenger and operational safety. Your FOD discussion correctly identified that debris on the apron could damage aircraft engines and result in accidents on the runway or airside, with unwanted operational costs and potential accidents cited as consequences. In Question 5, you identified the core coordination failure clearly — the need for one centralised office instead of three — and explained that this would allow information to be transferred instantly rather than waiting on phone or email responses. You also made a good case-specific point that a replacement aircraft could have been flown in from the Trinidad and Tobago hub more quickly had decision-making been centralised. However, you only developed one coordination failure when two were required, and a second distinct failure such as the ineffective use of the A-CDM system was needed to fully meet the mark scheme.

AC 2.3 — Pass
Your responses were clearly written and logically organised throughout, with good use of the case study to anchor your arguments. Your reasoning was generally easy to follow, particularly in Sections B and C. To strengthen your presentation further, ensure each answer addresses all parts of the question — particularly in multi-part questions where two distinct points are required.

Learning Outcome 3: PASS

AC 3.1 — Pass
Dontai, your five definitions — tour operator, guesthouse, ecotourism, carrying capacity, and DMO — are all accurate and clearly written. Each captures the core meaning of the term. The definitions would have been stronger with direct Pelican Cay links, which were largely absent here, but the conceptual understanding is solid. AC 3.1 is passed.

AC 3.2 — Pass
Your airport analysis is one of the strongest in the cohort. You correctly identify the unpaved runway as the critical barrier preventing commercial airline service, explain the competitive disadvantage this creates against other Caribbean destinations, and propose paving the runway using the development budget to enable small regional jets — practical and well justified. The second consequence, unpaved internal roads fragmenting the visitor experience and discouraging longer stays, is also well argued with a clear solution. Your tour operator versus travel agency distinction is accurate and well applied — you make the important point that a tour operator could package Pelican Cay's assets into ready-made, bookable experiences while travel agencies provide the marketing reach to sell them. The rainforest waterfall hike is vividly described with small group sizes, local guides, a picnic using Saturday market produce, and strong competitive positioning against crowded Caribbean alternatives. The homestay recommendation is the strongest accommodation response in this submission — you justify it against the government's community-benefit goal, address capital requirements, include training considerations covering hospitality standards and food safety, and show how it complements the existing guesthouse. AC 3.2 is passed.

AC 3.3 — Pass
Your Q4 comparisons are clear and accurate on both pairings. The tour operator versus travel agency comparison correctly identifies the distinction between product creation and product retail, and links both to Pelican Cay's visibility challenge. The resort versus guesthouse comparison covers scale, service style, atmosphere, and the hospitality pillar both serve — well handled. Your Q5 integrated response correctly prioritises the airport and traces the dependency into travel agency marketing and tourism product development, recommending the waterfall hike, fish market, and rum distillery as the initial priority experiences managed at low visitor numbers. The tourism section shows genuine strategic thinking — sequencing the beach and colonial fort as later additions once the foundation is in place. The response ends after the tourism sector, however, and does not address hospitality planning, food and beverage strategy, accommodation integration, a chain reaction failure point, or mitigation strategies. These gaps prevent the Q5 from reaching its potential but enough systems thinking is demonstrated across the response to sustain a pass at AC 3.3.

Learning Outcome 4: REFFERED

AC 4.1 — Pass
Dontai, your Q1(a) response covers all three principles with clear structure. Your empathy and emotional intelligence analysis correctly identifies the agent's cold, dismissive response as a failure to acknowledge the occasion, and your corrective — a sincere apology with an immediate personal gesture — is appropriate. Your employee empowerment principle is well applied, using the agent's own words "there's nothing I can do — the system assigned your room" to demonstrate the absence of authority and training, and your corrective actions of room upgrades, discounts, refunds, and alternative hotel bookings are all realistic. Your efficient problem solving principle correctly identifies that the issue was left entirely unresolved and escalated to a public one-star review, and your corrective action of taking ownership, contacting housekeeping, offering compensation, and following up personally before the guest left is well-argued. Your Q1(b) distinction between transactional and customer-centric culture is clear and accurate, with both decisions correctly identified — the agent hiding behind the system and management allowing confirmed rooms to be double-booked without any contingency or recovery protocol. The customer-centric alternative for management, a system that prevents such errors or immediately triggers a high-level recovery protocol, is practical and well-framed.

AC 4.2 — Pass
Your Q2(a) personalisation and customisation distinction is accurate and well-expressed. Personalisation is correctly described as hotel-driven use of collected guest data to tailor the experience proactively, while customisation gives guests active choices to shape their own experience. Your personalisation plan is one of the strongest in this cohort — your pre-arrival touchpoint includes a specific scripted email addressed to Mr Powell referencing his past sea-view room preference, his favourite restaurant, and a pre-booked anniversary table, which is a vivid and effective example of data-driven personalisation in action. Your check-in touchpoint uses guest history to greet him by name and acknowledge known preferences such as extra pillows and a quiet room. Your in-stay touchpoint covers housekeeping and food and beverage recommendations aligned with past behaviour. Your customisation plan is present but less developed than the personalisation side. Q2(b) on adaptability and Carnival does not appear in the submitted pages, which is a mark loss.

AC 4.3 — Referred
Q3(a) and Q3(b) are not present in the submitted pages. These questions carry 20 marks combined and their absence is the primary reason Section B cannot be passed. Your Q4 response makes a reasonable start — you correctly identify that surveys are collected but ignored and that there is no system to record guest preferences, propose a guest preference record covering likes, dislikes, room and pillow preferences, recommend monthly survey reviews with action on top issues, and suggest personalised follow-up emails to complaining guests within seven days. Your GM evaluation correctly identifies the "fill rooms, not be best friends" statement as a purely transactional mindset that harms service quality, and your three proposed cultural changes — retraining leadership to see service as a business priority, empowering staff to resolve complaints up to $150 without approval, and introducing a monthly Guest Hero recognition reward — are practical and well-chosen. However, the Q4 response ends abruptly without a chain reaction analysis or department-level systems integration, and Q3 is entirely missing.

Test Scores

LO1:

Pass

LO2:

Pass

LO3:

Pass

LO4:

Pass

Comments

You have demonstrated partial understanding of the required concepts; however, you have not fully meet criteria for a pass this time. You must resit all learning outcome/s you did not pass.