Student: Kadesha Williams
Course Unit: L4 THM230902 Principles of Marketing in the Tourism Industry
Learning Outcome 1: "Incomplete
No Attempt"
Learning Outcome 2: "Incomplete
No Attempt"
Learning Outcome 3: "Incomplete
No Attempt"
Learning Outcome 4: "Referred 38%
Kadesha, your submission demonstrates a basic understanding of digital marketing tools such as social media, influencers, OTAs, and community involvement. You show awareness of stakeholder concerns and sustainability themes, which is positive. However, this assessment required analytical depth at Level 5, and unfortunately your response remained largely descriptive throughout.
A major weakness is the absence of Task 1.
In Task 2, KPIs were not evaluated numerically. The campaign clearly provided measurable targets (20%, 30%, 15%, 10%), yet these were not analyzed. There was no discussion of ROI, CTR, engagement rates, or conversion metrics, which are essential in evaluating digital marketing effectiveness.
Task 3 showed your strongest effort. You identified ethical concerns such as cultural commodification and community impact. However, stronger critical reasoning, sustainability frameworks, and academic grounding were needed.
Task 4 included practical ideas (email personalization, eco-tours, local sourcing), but recommendations were not measurable or strategically structured. Future responses must include SMART targets and align clearly with earlier KPI analysis.
To improve:
Explicitly apply marketing models.
Integrate academic sources.
Use measurable KPIs and ROI calculations.
Move from description to critical evaluation.
Structure arguments more formally using marketing terminology.
This script does not meet the pass requirement for LO4. Significant improvement in theoretical integration and analytical depth is required."
LO1:
86.25%LO2:
0.00%LO3:
88.75%LO4:
93.75%