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Last updated: April 21, 2026

Student: Tishonique Fowler

Course Information

Semester: Fall 2025

Course Unit: L4 THM230903 Airport and Airline Passenger Services: Quality Management Approaches

Credits: 15
Course Grade: PASS

Grade Overview

Quiz Completion: Pass
Test Grade: Pass
Term Paper Grade: Pass

Term Paper Feedback

Learning Outcome 1: "Pass 71%

The student demonstrates a sound foundational understanding of the aviation industry, particularly in relation to regulation, operational processes, and the evolution of air transportation. Most responses meet the required criteria and show clear engagement with the questions. However, the work is consistently descriptive rather than analytical, with limited depth in explaining industry-wide impact, interrelationships, and long-term structural changes.

The weakest area is AC 1.3 (Stakeholders), where the response does not fully meet the requirement of four clearly developed stakeholders with strong interdependence analysis. Across the submission, stronger use of aviation terminology, deeper explanation, and more explicit cause-and-effect reasoning would significantly improve performance.

To reach a higher standard, the student should focus on:

Moving from description → analysis
Expanding explanations to show industry-wide and long-term impact
Strengthening interconnections between concepts (systems thinking)

Overall, this is a competent attempt, with clear potential for improvement."

Learning Outcome 2: "Pass 77%

This submission demonstrates a clear and competent understanding of airport operations, passenger flow, safety systems, and service quality in relation to the HIA case. The student remains closely aligned to the case study and addresses all questions with relevant points. Stronger areas include airport safety measures, emergency design, signage, and quality assurance tools, where the answers are clear, accurate, and appropriately applied.

The main limitation across the script is that many responses are brief and remain at explanation level rather than moving further into analysis. In several places, the student identifies the correct issue or solution but does not fully develop the operational reasoning or wider impact on passenger service, safety, and airport efficiency. The hypothetical scenario answers are sensible and practical, but they would be stronger with more detailed explanation of why each action improves both safety and flow.

Overall, this is a solid attempt. It meets the learning outcome and demonstrates appropriate understanding, though stronger analytical depth and fuller development of answers would be needed for a better score."

Learning Outcome 3: "PASS 91%

AC 3.1 – (Tasks 1–3)
Grade: PASS
Feedback:
You show a clear grasp of the major safety and security systems used by Qatar Airways, referencing SMS, IOSA, and regulatory oversight accurately. Your answer indicates awareness of how departments coordinate to maintain compliance and operational safety. However, you tend to restate the case information rather than interpret it. There is little discussion of why these systems are effective or what risks they aim to mitigate.

AC 3.2 – Tasks 4–6)
Grade: PASS
Feedback:
You give a straightforward explanation of aviation safety culture and describe several initiatives that support it, such as reporting and training systems. This shows that you understand the structure of Qatar Airways’ approach. What’s missing is evaluation of what is done but not how well it works or whether there are weaknesses. Your work would be stronger if you assessed the impact of these measures or offered examples where such systems have succeeded or failed in practice.

AC 3.3 – (Tasks 7–9)
Grade: PASS
Feedback:
Your discussion of passenger service improvements highlights relevant elements like digital technology, crew preparation, and customer engagement. You clearly understand what the airline does to maintain high service standards. Still, your response feels more descriptive than analytical. You could improve by linking these enhancements to measurable results, such as service reliability, satisfaction ratings, or brand image. A short comparison with other major airlines would also help demonstrate critical thinking.

Part 2 – Task 10
Grade: PASS
Feedback:
You recognize the different components of Qatar Airways’ operational framework and how they contribute to safety and service quality. The structure of your response is logical, but it stops short of a full integrated analysis. You mention coordination and compliance but don’t explain how these aspects reinforce each other in day-to-day operations. Future answers could show stronger synthesis by demonstrating the relationship between safety culture, security policies, and customer experience strategies.

Part 2 – Task 11
Grade: Incomplete
Feedback:
You did not submit this section, which is a required part of the assessment. The improvement plan should outline realistic ways to enhance safety, security, and service through organizational, technological, and human-factor measures. Its absence means your work cannot meet the full criteria for LO3. You will need to complete this section to achieve a pass overall.

Overall Feedback to Student
Your responses show good understanding of the theoretical aspects of safety and service management but remain largely descriptive and incomplete. The missing improvement plan significantly affects your final outcome. When you revise, aim to explain how and why systems or strategies work, rather than simply listing them."

Learning Outcome 4: "PASS
You demonstrated a good understanding of quality management principles and their practical application to the HGIA case study. You correctly identified service problems, proposed suitable improvement strategies, applied an appropriate quality management tool, and produced a structured implementation plan. You also selected relevant performance metrics, identified realistic implementation challenges with appropriate solutions, and showed clear awareness of the strategic importance of quality management in airport operations. Overall, the work meets the learning outcome requirements."

Test Scores

LO1:

73.75%

LO2:

87.50%

LO3:

85%

LO4:

95%

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