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Grade Details

Last updated: July 16, 2025

Student: Jason Williams

Course Information

Semester: Summer 2024

Course Unit: L7 Advanced Research Methods

Course Grade: PASS

Grade Overview

Quiz Completion: Pass
Test Grade: Not Applicable
Term Paper Grade: Pass

Term Paper Feedback

Learning Outcome 1: "Learning Outcome 1 | PASS

The research problems are well-appraised, and the aims and objectives are clearly justified within the defined scope and timeframe. The research approaches are critically explored and justified."

Learning Outcome 2: "LO2 | PASS

The literature review is comprehensive and well-structured, demonstrating the student's ability to critically engage with a wide range of sources. The student has successfully analyzed different theoretical approaches to the research problem, identifying key gaps and challenges in the existing frameworks like ISO 27001, PCI DSS, and IASME Cyber Assurance. The review is not only descriptive but also analytical, providing a critical evaluation of the literature and its applicability to the research context. The student has used a variety of sources, including recent studies and industry reports, which adds depth to the review. This section is a strong example of the student's ability to create a structured and thorough critical literature review, meeting the Level 7 criteria."

Learning Outcome 3: "LO3 | Pass
This revised submission reflects a commendable level of academic engagement and critical thinking. You have responded effectively to earlier feedback and shown a clear understanding of the research process. Your proposal is now well-positioned for implementation, and I encourage you to carry this momentum forward as you pursue the practical phase of your research.

Final Grade: Pass

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While the student has selected an appropriate mixed-methods approach for the research objectives, the explanation of the methodology lacks sufficient detail. The student briefly mentions qualitative and quantitative methods but fails to provide a detailed rationale for their choice. Specifically, the section on data collection methods is underdeveloped; there is insufficient information on how participants will be selected, the types of questions that will be asked during interviews, and how the survey data will be analyzed. Additionally, although ethical considerations are mentioned, there is a lack of detail on how ethical issues will be addressed and mitigated during the research process. To meet the Level 7 criteria, the student needs to expand on these areas, providing a more detailed and justified methodology that reflects the research objectives and adheres to ethical guidelines."

Learning Outcome 4: "LO4 | PASS

The research proposal is well-developed, with a clear and coherent structure that includes research questions, a literature review, and a detailed methodology. The student has proposed appropriate techniques for both quantitative and qualitative data collection and analysis, ensuring that the methods chosen are aligned with the research objectives. The proposal is practical and feasible, with a clear plan for implementation that considers the specific challenges faced by call centres, particularly SMEs. The student has demonstrated a good understanding of the research process and has effectively communicated their ideas in a manner suitable for a Level 7 assignment. The proposed framework is well-conceived, and the student has provided a logical and well-argued case for its development and implementation."

Test Scores

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LO3:

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